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Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Story Time | #1

All of a sudden I had this idea of writing stories. Actually i love writing stories and my 1119 A1 is thanks to story writing (XP self praise...). Wellllll..... story writing also enables one to express their creative side. The stories are completely fictional and so are the characters. Its just random thoughts I get. So whenever I get an idea I'd write it down for u guys wokay? Last but not least... do comment and give your opinions in any form. XD. Lets go~

His eyes opened gradually. He don't really understand what he is seeing. It wasn't clear but he could see a rough image of a man's back in white clothes and a few more people. But he's eyes were heavy. He heard a lady's voice " he's awake. Please allow the doctor to do some checks." He's mind couldn't stop thinking where and why is he there. Light flashes he's eyes. "He seems to be fine for the mean time," said the doctor. Then Nate's parents and friends sat around him. Nate's mother, Samantha was so worried yet relieved to see her son awake. "Dude, how are you? you fainted when you were driving. Do you remember anything?" After listening to those words, Nate could recall bits and pieces of wat happened.

Nate's parents left the room so that the youngsters could chat. "You got me very worried back there man." said Brendan, "luckily I was following you man" he continued, "Scared the crap out of me seeing u bang the curb all of a sudden" he explained." "Do you know why you fainted all of a sudden?" asked Veronica. "I dunno," said Nate but he knew wat was wrong with him. "Didnt the doc say anything?" Brendan ask, "your parents told that you were just exhausted" Veronica answered. "we'll be leaving now, take care man." Brendan said, "call us if you need us" added Veronica. "hey guys, did you tell Stephie?"

"Yes, they did" said Stephie. She just arrived rushing from her workplace. "we gotta go guys, see ya" said Brendan leaving Stephie and Nate in the room. "Is there something you wanna tell me?" asked Stephie. "Why say so?" answered Nate puzzled. "Like having a disease?" "does thalassemia sound familiar?" Stephie added. "how..." Nate qouted, "I jus overheard the doc and ur parents jus now" explained Stephie. The room was quiet for a brief moment. "was this the reason?" "was this the reason!!!" tears started falling of her face. "You lied that we weren't meant to be!" shouted Stephie. Nate could only lift up his weak arms trying to wipe the tears of her face. " you know, the only regret I have in my life is to be unable to spent more time with you" as he wiped the tears away. She fell to his chest and cried. Nate hugged her. Tears were visible dropping of Nate's face. Hiding behind the doors Samantha saw everything and broke into tears. Jeff, her husband tried to comfort her.

Thats all for this time...... haha... jus got this much of juice. Hope to write more. XD ~S.M.~

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